I ignore any press release that includes a file
attachment.
Press releases should be written in the generally accepted manner --
plain text. File attachments may contain viruses and it is ridiculous that a
simple statement be sent in anything but the body of an email. A fellow
journalist also tells me that he frequently downloads his email to his PDA and
reads press releases on the go. An attachment will not do in this
case.
If the title of the press release does not clarify
the subject, why read it?
A simple title such as, "eReleases.com Announces Launch of Newsletter
Service" tells me exactly what the press release is about. A title such as,
"eReleases.com to Launch Exciting and Fantastic New Service" does little to
help me.
Adjectives are bad.
The worst thing you can do to a journalist is try to shape their view
before they've had a chance to digest information. Using words such as
"amazing" or "exciting," or simply using exclamation marks, is a huge turn off
for journalists. It also sets you up for disappointment because a journalist
will say to himself, "This isn't amazing or exciting." Think about it this way
-- just the facts. You are marketing your business to a member of the media,
not a consumer.
Grammar and spelling count.
I've seen too many press releases that have spelling or grammar
mistakes in the title. This is a wonderful indicator for any journalist that
the company does not have high professional standards.
Consider having a professional writer or service
work on your press release.
There is a simple, yet complicated formula to writing press releases.
Poorly written press releases are the easiest way to guarantee poor
performance. Consider these tips as a starting point on your road to getting
media exposure for your business.
Reprinted with permission from the author
Ben Silverman is the Publisher of DotcomScoop.com, a weekly
newsletter digest covering the Internet, technology, telecommunications, media
and finance sectors. He also contributes a weekly business news column to The
New York Post. Previously, Ben worked in the music and Internet industries. He
has received an incredible mount of media exposure, including features by The
Wall St. Journal and CNNfn and being quoted as an expert on issues by The
Washington Post and New York Times.
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